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fluffykitty2001
03 July 2008 @ 01:24 pm
Drifting Through The North Star, Chapter 6  
The posting of this chapter was delayed by the fact that my employer insisted the last two weeks that I actually do work instead of letting me write.  Damn them!  This is another chapter I've reworked tons of times, and I'm very curious to see if this one is well received.  It is Kelli and Charlene at a mall, and is supposed to reveal more about their characters.  You'll have to let me know if how I presented this was actually interesting.  

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fluffykitty2001
27 June 2008 @ 12:08 am
Entangled  
Here it is, another crazy idea of mine. I still don’t have any time to write fics, but this idea wouldn’t die. I’ve been bouncing this one around since “Jus In Bello”, and picked it up again after the Season finale, inspired with a plot. As usual, it’s going to have a few twists. It’ll be several chapters, and includes spoilers all the way up to the finale. 
 
You’ll have to let me know if this first chapter sparks your interest. I’m biased, since I already know how the rest of it is going (very excited about it). Happy reading!
 
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fluffykitty2001
23 June 2008 @ 08:16 pm
All Manner Of Things, Chapter 12  
I've been bouncing around this one for over a week, but summer activities and the blog got in the way.  I don't know how I had time this morning to finish it, but I did and I'm grateful.  This is a cutesy chapter, and all Pamela and Foreman.   Hopefully it makes for a nice change of pace from your day.  It certainly did for me.

 
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fluffykitty2001
20 June 2008 @ 06:28 pm
Drifting Through The North Star, Chapter 5  
This is what  I call the "make it or break it" chapter, and its one of my favorites.  Either I'm going to pull people in for the rest of the novel, or turn people away.  This is a long, complex, and critical chapter to the story.  Some backstory for Kelli is introduced, and there's some more good stuff with Joe.   

Since this is such an important chapter, I'm requesting feedback, even if it's only a couple of lines.  I've reworked this one quite a bit, so I'm really curious if it works.  Thanks much, and happy reading!

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fluffykitty2001
10 June 2008 @ 11:25 pm
Drifting Through The North Star, Chapter 4  

A really great question was asked about this story.  What kind of story is it, and who's the audience?  While there are hints that it's a romance, it's a coming of age story.  It should appeal to thirty somethings, but I don't see why other age groups won't get it.  It's about finding your identity.  There is a romance in the story, but it's not the main focus.  Anyway, I hope that wasn't too vague.

This chapter really opens up the Kelli/Steven interaction.  It's meant to be depicted as a highly unusual friendship.  Hopefully the chapter sets that up well, because Steven does end up having a huge impact on Kelli, and vice versa.  Thank you so much for giving this a chance! 

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